Today's society provides people with various ways to lose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today's lifestyle should be addressed first. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Nowadays most
of
people suffer from Change preposition
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out of
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out-of-body
body
shape
. Many people go to the gym and follow the diet
plan
to overcome this
problem while
others think that they want to change their lifestyle and poor food
habits. I believe if we have a proper meal plan
and the workout schdule
we can solve Correct your spelling
schedule
this
problem. In this
essay, I will discuss this
matter and I will share my opinion.
To begin
, from our
young age we want to do some exercise to have Change the word
a
healthy
life. It will give not only weight loss Add an article
a healthy
benifit
but Correct your spelling
benefits
benefit
aslo
it will help to have a Correct your spelling
also
peacefull
mind. There may be different reasons to have Correct your spelling
peaceful
body
fat, some times
it comes from their Correct your spelling
sometimes
gens
and sometimes bad Correct your spelling
genes
food
habits. Therefore
, if we go to Correct article usage
a proffesional
proffesional
gym instructor he will provide us personalized workout schedule which will help to reduce Correct your spelling
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body
fat. For an
example, Correct article usage
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we
do not want to go to Correct word choice
if we
gym
, we can do Add an article
the gym
out door
exercise, yoga, Correct your spelling
outdoor
jogging
. If we follow Correct word choice
and jogging
this
continuously we can see the result in the future
.
Moreover
, food
is the most powerfull
cause Correct your spelling
powerful
to
our weight gain. If we do not have Change preposition
of
proper
meal Correct article usage
a proper
plan
it will be difficult to maintain the figure. Always, meal
should have balance Add an article
the meal
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such
as more protiens
, vitamins and low carbohydrate because carbohydrate is Correct your spelling
proteins
protein
main
fact Add an article
the main
to gain
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in gaining
body
fat. For example
, we can gain good fat from nuts and avacado
. When we continue Correct your spelling
avocados
diet
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a diet
plan
long time we can see better result
in the Fix the agreement mistake
results
future
.
In contrast
, we can identify bad food
habits adn
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and
lifestyle
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lifestyles
also
cause to
unhealthy Change preposition
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body
shape
. These days most of
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people Correct article usage
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addicted
to Add a missing verb
are addicted
have
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food
which will be a tread
to our Correct your spelling
threat
future
healthy life because always younger generation prefer
to have Correct subject-verb agreement
prefers
food
from outside. For instance
, most of
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the
parents fill their Correct article usage
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kids
lunch Change to a genitive case
kid's
kids'
box
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boxes
from
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with
the
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restuarent
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restaurant
food
, because it is easy for them in the morning. As a result
of this
, future
generation
will have chubby Fix the agreement mistake
generations
body
shape
when they Fix the agreement mistake
shapes
grown
up.
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grow
To conclude
, it is difficult to maintain healthy
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a healthy
body
only from exercise and diet
plan
we need to have good
lifestyle. But I personally believe we want to enjoy our life, Add an article
a good
therefore
, always we can not go behinde
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behind
diet
food
, some days we have to cheat our
meal Change preposition
on our
plan
and we can enjoy different food
. At the same time
we need to continue Add a comma
,time
exercies
and Correct your spelling
exercises
exercise
diet
plan
, long term we can seee
a healthy Correct your spelling
see
use
body
shape
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