Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

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in criminal activities.
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teenager
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teenagers
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are more involved in illegal activities lately and it is increasing day by day. There are many
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for
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however
there are some possible
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to curb
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causes and
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solutions
.
To begin
with, Criminal activity in
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adolescents
has been increasing for
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various
reasons. First and foremost is unemployment.
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, some people face difficulty finding employment even after graduation and to
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their basic needs and for the survival of family and their own selves they do unethical
ativity
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activity
.
For instance
, There are some people who have
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skill
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skills
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to work in
engineering
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field but
due to
lack
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of job
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they do not get
job
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a job
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and
eventually
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,eventually
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they do criminal
activity
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activities
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such
as
pick-pocekting
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pickpocketing
and robbery. Not only
this
but , poverty and inflation are
another
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other
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reasons for youth crime.
In addition
, peer pressure
also
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one of the significant
cause
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causes
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of juvenile
deliquency
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delinquency
as some teenagers feel inferior to their friends and
collegues
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colleagues
so they drag to some
unlawfull
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unlawful
act to match their standards. There are some
measurement
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measurements
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that
adress
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address
the problem
afforementioned
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aforementioned
above.
Firstly
, the government provide more employment options to
skill
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workers.
Moreover
, the authorities can provide free education to
underprivilaged
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underprivileged
child so they can acquire basic knowledge to survive and
fulfill
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their needs.
Furthermore
, the government can launch some community programs for young children where they can learn about ethical doings.
To conclude
, there is a sudden rise in
involvement
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the involvement
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of
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adolescents
adolescent
adolsecnt
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adolescents
in criminal activity
however
there are
reason
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reasons
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to do so like unemployment and lack of education but we can combat
this
issue by providing better education and more employment option
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • surge
  • productive activities
  • quality education
  • social media
  • peer pressure
  • economic disparity
  • disadvantaged backgrounds
  • legitimate means
  • inclusive education
  • mentorship
  • community policing
  • youth engagement
  • early intervention
  • constructive pathways
  • social services
  • at-risk families
  • root causes
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