You visit a cafe every day. Write a letter to the manager of the cafe. In your letter – Say what you like about the cafe - Suggest an improvement to the cafe – Explain the benefits of your suggestion

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Dear David, I am writing to give honest feedback for your cafe 'Warner's Place'. You and your staff are so good that I couldn't resist myself from writing

this

Firstly

, I love the way your staff treat the customers with a big smile. The range of continental cuisins

as well as

the variety of coffee beans always make my day special and that's why, I visit Warner's place every morning.

However

, I'd love to see some additional range of tea and cheese bread.

Additionally

, you could open a balcony section to sit for customers that have been closed for the

last

5 years.

As a result

, additional types of tea and bread will attract more Indian consumers like me.

Moreover

, the balcony section will allow customers to enjoy their breakfast in the open air. I'd like to see the changes in the cafe soon. I am looking forward to a positive response. Best regards, Ravindra

Submitted by ravirajole on Wed Sep 27 2023

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