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Humans are producing an increasing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion, how can recycling save the environment and help the people on Earth?

In the present day, solid
waste
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 management has become an increasingly important concern. Many people believe that throwing their garbage into a
dumping site
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dumpsite
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 is a solution. Communities are encouraged to separate
waste
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 into bins
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 its type,
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 as organic matter, glass, plastic, and paper, in order to promote recycling. From my perspective, there are many advantages to reusing materials, as outlined below. On the one hand, accumulating garbage in dump sites can raise serious social and environmental problems. Communities living nearby are exposed to toxic gases
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 as methane, unpleasant odours, and contaminated water. These residents are vulnerable to diseases including cholera, typhoid, and lung cancer.
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, animals may eat food
waste
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 wrapped in polythene found around landfills, which can lead to digestive problems and death.
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, not only humans but
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 other living creatures are affected if these problems are ignored.
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, there are growing efforts to reduce the environmental damage caused by humans. In the past, it was believed that burning polythene and plastic was an effective method, but
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 was later found to increase air pollution. Nowadays, people tend to focus on recycling to make better use of materials. Many countries have already adopted
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 approach as a solution to deal with non-biodegradable
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.
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, recycling can help reduce pollution and allow the production of new goods from used materials.
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, the concept of “
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-to-energy” has become popular worldwide, as
waste
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 can be converted into electricity. In conclusion, it is not easy to reverse the damage already done to the environment, but new technologies
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 as recycling should be promoted to ensure a sustainable future.

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task response
Plan your answer. State your view in the intro and give main ideas in order.
coherence
Use topic sentences for each paragraph and keep a clear link between ideas.
lexical
Use simple words and short, clear sentences. Avoid long, hard phrases.
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Add more facts or numbers to show how much recycling helps.
structure
Two sides are shown and a clear view is given.
structure
Intro and conclusion link to the topic well.
content
The idea of recycling as a solution is clear.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • recycling
  • reduce
  • reuse
  • waste
  • trash
  • landfill
  • pollution
  • pollute
  • energy
  • save
  • emissions
  • greenhouse gases
  • resources
  • paper
  • plastic
  • metal
  • glass
  • curbside
  • bin
  • sorting
  • recyclable
  • non-recyclable
  • compost
  • environment
  • health
  • jobs
  • money
  • city
  • community
  • policy
  • law
  • plan
  • awareness
  • practice
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