You are going to teach English to your friend's child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter: tell your teacher about the child. say when and where you will teach the child. explain what books you would like to borrow.

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Dear Mr. Tursunov.

This

is Shahlo Eshtukhtaeva. I am an English student of yours, and I think you remember me. I am writing to ask

for

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my friend's child about your grammatical books. Because I started my English course two months ago. And my guys have been coming until

this

days

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. So, my friend's child

was come

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to my English course two days ago.

Hence

, I am going to teach very hard and interesting grammatical topics to her. Her name is Raykhona. She is

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responsible and clever girl.

Besides

she is going to enter the university in the future.

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I am going to teach hard grammatical themes to her

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enter the university which she

want

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Therefore

, I need

your

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some kinds of hard grammatical books. Please, you can send the above-mentioned books to the school. Thanks beforehand for your help. Yours sincerely, Shakhlo Eshtukhtaeva.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

147 words

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You are going to teach English to your friend's child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter: tell your teacher about the child. say when and where you will teach the child. explain what books you would like to borrow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible argument on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

First impressions are highly important. So, some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion