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The diagram shows the life cycle of flowering plants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the life cycle of flowering plants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The picture illustrates the life cycle of plants.
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, it is a big process to grow a plant on the earth, the following paragraphs are going to provide the whole process.
To begin
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 with,
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 circulation provides a step-by-step procedure of how it grows as a mature plant.
The first step is
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 that when a seed is dumped under the sand it absorbs enough water content for germination. In
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 particular part, it seeks moisture and a warmer sensation to grow those roots. After the growth, the stem starts to grow out of the land to absorb sunlight. When looking at the
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 cycle that the stem reaches to the pollination, some insects in order to follow take a portion of pollen to spread among plants.
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, seeds and fruit are ready to form under fertilization. The next level is that the seed blasts from a plant and spreads beside the area.
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,
this
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 process again starts to grow clockwise.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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