You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter •Say where / when you went on holiday •Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday •Tell them what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with my recent trip arrangements. I had booked a

three-day

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two-night trip to Mauritius in June 2021. After reading a positive review of your

services

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services,

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we booked my stay with your travel agency.

but

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But

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my experience is not a pleasant one.

the

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The

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trip was filled with unpleasant experiences throughout our stay.

the

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The

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room service, food menu, and hotel staff behaviour

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are

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below

expectation

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expectations

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Furthermore

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arrangments

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arrangements

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made with Hotel Beach Granada were below par.

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whole week was spent in an appalling way.

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, I would like to suggest a few recommendations for future tours.

please

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liaise with

hotel

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the hotel

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staff and their arrangement 1 week in advance. tell them about trippers' food preferences, accommodation preferences and duration of stay .

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this

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will help you in arranging the tour in a better way.

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apply

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Also

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you will get positive reviews from your clients. Hope to hear positive feedback from you . Yours faithfully JOHN Wilkinson

yash334

Sep 27, 2023

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grammar

Fix big grammar and spell. Use simple, full sentences. Put a full stop at the end of each sentence.

structure

Make one main idea in each paragraph. Start with a short line that tells what the paragraph is about.

content

Be clear about what you want the agency to do. Say a plan and a date if you have one.

tone

Keep a calm and polite tone. Do not use too strong words.

content

The letter has a clear aim to tell the agency about a bad trip.

form

The letter begins with a proper greeting and ends with a formal closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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