You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter •Say where / when you went on holiday •Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday •Tell them what you would like them to do

#minutes #holiday #trip #travel #agency #•say #•explain #•tell

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with my recent trip arrangements. I had booked a three-day two-night trip to Mauritius in June 2021. After reading a positive review of your services we booked my stay with your travel agency. but my experience is not a pleasant one. the trip was filled with unpleasant experiences throughout our stay. the room service, food menu, and hotel staff behaviour is below expectation.

Furthermore

, arrangments made with Hotel Beach Granada were below par.my whole week was spent in an appalling way.

Therefore

, I would like to suggest a few recommendations for future tours. please liaise with hotel staff and their arrangement 1 week in advance. tell them about trippers' food preferences, accommodation preferences and duration of stay .

this

will help you in arranging the tour in a better way.,

Also

you will get positive reviews from your clients. Hope to hear positive feedback from you . Yours faithfully JOHN Wilkinson

Submitted by yash334 on Wed Sep 27 2023

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