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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
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The given bar chart shows how much the annual income that were earned by American
households
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 in three different years 2007, 20o11, and 2015. It is apparent that the number of
households
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 gaining the two highest salaries in 2015 was higher than in other years.
Moreover
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, the figures for
households
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 earning 50,000-74,999
USD
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 and 75,000-99,999
USD
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 (the third and second highest categories) are almost unchanged in all given years. The first category (Less than 25,000
USD
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) was 25
million
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households
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 in 2007 and increased in the next year to around 28
million
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.
However
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, it slightly fell to about 27
million
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. The number of
households
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 who get annual income in the second category (25--,000-49,999
USD
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) was around 27
million
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 in the first year and experienced a slight increase to almost 30
million
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.
Nevertheless
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, it decreased to about 28
million
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. The figures for
households
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 gaining salary in the third and fourth categories (500,000-74,9999 and 75,000-99,999
USD
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) almost remained. The number of
households
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 getting the highest salary or the fifth category (100,000
USD
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 or more) was almost 30
million
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 in 2007 and experienced a down-trend at around 27.5
million
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.
However
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, it rocketed
at the end
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 of the period to over 37
million
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, usd, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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