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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Is this schools or parents responsibility?

#children #lifestyle #schools #parents #responsibility
There are several obstacles to getting
kids
 to develop healthy
lifestyle
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 in
this
 day and age of increased fitness and well-being
awarness
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awareness
. It’s clear that both
parents
 and school organisations have a big part to play in making sure that
kids
 live healthy, active lifestyles. I totally agree with a few instances. Let’s start by thinking about the function of
schools
. Since children often spend a large amount of their day in
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creache
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creche
 of school, educational institutions must place a high priority on the health of their students. To help
with
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the
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with
this
,
schools
 can offer children
wholeseme
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wholesome
 lunches and snacks
while
 doing rid of the cafeteria’s unhealthy junk food alternatives.
Schools
 can
also
 change the way they teach by
emphasining
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emphasizing
emphasising
 technology use more physical activity to improve the general health of their students. It’s important to remember that
parents
 must play a crucial in
rackling
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handling
 concerns like childhood obesity diabetes mental health and cognitive development
in addition
 to
schools
 taking on
his
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responsability
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responsibility
: The most major influence on a
childs
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 habits comes from their
parents
, especially during the formative years.
Parents
 may help children develop good eating habits that will serve them well throughout their lives by teaching them the value of eating foods high
protein
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. To elaborate,
parents
 can offer their
kids
 alternatives to sedentary hobbies like
videogames
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video games
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 and
execisive
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exercise
executive
 online, browsing by getting them involved in a
vararity
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variety
 of sports and physical activities at home.
Additionally
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parents
 can teach their
kids
 where to get low-calorie and low-fat foods showing the negative consequences of consuming
fasts
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 foods using actual life
exmpls
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examples
example
. In
conclusion
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 it is evident that
parents
 and
schools
 play crucial roles in
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ensuring
 that
kids
 live healthy lives all over the world. In order to protect the
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wellbeing
well-being
 of the future generation, these two powerful communities must work together.
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