Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it used to earn tourism revenue , but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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that custom will be ruined if it is used to

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tourism

revenue, the others decide

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tourism

is the only way

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preserve the

culture

. Personally ,

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probably agree with the first sentence and the paragraph will explain the reason. On the one hand ,

culture

can be used in many

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tourism

explore

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the

culture

for a lot of benefits

such

as money , performance,

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In fact , maybe

tourism

just

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the money and

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care about the quality of the custom .Those who say

tourism

is a bad thing for their

culture

. Mainly , it has an adverse impact on the environment . The influx of tourists contributes to increased pollution levels , overconsumption of natural resources and damage to fragile ecosystems .

Similarly

, touristry can lead to the commodification of local

culture

, it fosters mutual understanding and respect between the host and customers

On the other hand

,those who say

tourism

is a good thing for their

culture

. First of all , the revenue generated from

tourism

not only supports various industries but

also

provides vital income for local communities . It allows for the development of small businesses like local handicrafts and street food vendors , thereby improving the livelihoods of many . When tourists engage with the local

culture

, it fosters mutual understanding and respect between the host and visitors .

This

cultural exchange helps break down stereotypes and misconceptions . promoting a more positive image of the host country and it is people .

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everything into account,

culture

should be

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and

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Tourism

may have a solution and

the

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responsibilities

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in

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defend

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the custom .

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the revenue , the

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in many circumstances is the most important thing in the way to protect the

culture

.