some people believe that culture will be ruined if it used to earn tourism revenu, but other think that tour ism is the only way to protecting culture. discuss both sides and give you opinion.

Many individual think that if

culture

be used to earn money from

tourism

, it will be ruined.

Whereas

other

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others

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believed

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that

tourism

can protect the

culture

. in my opinion,

i

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agree with the second idea. Some people

belive

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believe

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that

culture

will be ruined if it is used to earn

tourism

revenue.

This

can be true because the

culture

may be not pure anymore.

This

can

be explain

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that

individual

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individuals

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often

use

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uses

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culture

as

the

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a

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monetization

tools

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, not because they love it and want to share

with

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it with

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tourist

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tourists

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. For

exmaple

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example

,

Hoi

An ancient

town

still

as

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in

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the same form

when

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it was built. Clearly, there is no reparation or reconstruction

on

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of

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Hoi

An ancient

town

and it

is being

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has been

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destroy

a

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apply

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little by little

through

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out years.

On the other hand

,

i

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believe that

tourism

is the only way

protecting

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to protect

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culture

.

Culture

only

show

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shows

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that

it

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isit

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still valuable when it can help people to make money.

For instance

,

Hoi

An

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ancient

town

and many tourist

attraction

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attractions

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that make a lot of money for

individual

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individuals

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who live there. If

Hoi

An ancient

town

can not use to earn revenue anymore, it will

be destroy

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be destroyed

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to make another useful construction. In conclusion,

although

many people still think that

culture

will be ruined because of

tourism

,

i

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I

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believe that tourist activity is the best way to keep

culture

not to

be destroy

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be destroyed

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and make some income.