You child is going on a school trip overseas for week. The Headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. In your letter: Mention why you would like to join the trip. Ask some general questions about the trip. Mention how you can be helpful

Dear Mr Johns, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am interested
to join
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the London trip planned
on
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for
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10th October for
the
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three days. I am a tour guide and O have visited London many times.
Therefore
, I know most of the places there especially, the specific areas where students can enjoy
at
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the maximum extent. My
last
visit was on previous week with a batch of students from another school. If I get a chance to come, I can provide
explanantions
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explanations
explanation
and history to students, I believe
this
may be more interesting for adolescents.
In addition
, I can help with other guidances that
required
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such
as helping with the food for pupils. It would be
benefical
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beneficial
if you could tell me if any mic or speakers are needed.
Also
, I would like to know where the excursion is focusing, that
this
is on historical or entertainment aspects, so, I can prepare better for the journey. I expect to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Caroline Hough
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural enrichment
  • educational experience
  • personal interest
  • itinerary
  • accommodation
  • roles and responsibilities
  • safety measures
  • emergency procedures
  • medical and disciplinary issues
  • first aid certification
  • language proficiency
  • volunteer experience
  • group management
  • supervision
  • schedule adherence
  • pre-trip preparations
  • post-trip follow-up
  • photo sharing
  • event recap
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