The diagram shows how fruit is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The process diagram depicts information about how

fruit

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is canned.

Overall

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, it can clearly be seen that there is a lot of process that can be divided into four main points. First thing

first,

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the

fruit

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in the garden

picked

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is picked

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the

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apply

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hand and put

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apply

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in the basket. The

fruit

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that has been picked will be lifted onto the truck and

transport

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transported

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them

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apply

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to the factory. Once the

fruit

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is arrived

Change to the active voice

arrives

has arrived

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they

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will washed

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with

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a lot of water.

Then

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, the

fruit

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will be checked by

magnifying

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a magnifying

the magnifying

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glass. After that, they will move to the cold

storing

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storage

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to have a high temperature.

Then

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, the

fruit

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is graded by the scales and

peel them

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peeled

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before they

will

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are

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remove

Wrong verb form

removed

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by the skin which is coring.

Finally

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, after

skin

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the skin

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being

Unnecessary verb

apply

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removed, it is time to

slicing

Wrong verb form

slice it

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into pieces and put it in the can. Can which has already

fruit

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in it will sealed to make it sterile and cooked

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a high temperature to make

them

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longer expired.

Then

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, before they move to the storage, each can will be

labelling

Wrong verb form

labelled

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and

finally

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they are ready to distribute to the supermarket by truck.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fruit with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

191 words

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