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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is predicted that all types of motorized
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 will be driven without
drivers
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 and solely people inside these
vehicles
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 will be passengers.
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 essay will contend that the benefits of
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 situation outweigh the drawbacks. It will first demonstrate that
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vehicles
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 are more convenient, and safer than traditional
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, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, namely chances to become jobless, is not valid. The primary advantage of
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vehicles
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 is that they are more convenient or user-friendly.
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 to say that
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 offers convenience by allowing passengers to relax, work, or engage in other activities during their commute.
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, commuters can use their travel time more productively by checking emails, reading, or even taking a nap, rather than focusing on driving.
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,
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 cars can be safer as they have the potential to reduce accidents caused by human error,
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 as speeding, distractions, and impaired driving.
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, self-driving technology can detect obstacles and apply brakes faster than a human driver, preventing collisions. Those opposed to
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 say that it allows the driver to leave their job as the
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 are less likely to need
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.
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, people are more concerned about their safety and comfortable journey, because of
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 they are more interested in
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transport
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, and it might be unwise to invest money in
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 without considering their safety issues and convenience. In many modern cities, people have already started to use
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vehicles
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 to reduce accidents and these types of transportation provide them accessibility. In conclusion, the benefits of
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vehicles
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 as they are safe and convenient, clearly exceed the flawed argument that it will create a jobless environment for
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.

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Coherence & Cohesion
Continue to develop your ideas with clear and concise explanations, ensuring logical flow from one point to the next.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a variety of sentence structures and linking words to enhance readability and coherence.
Task Achievement
Maintain a clear position throughout the essay, addressing the task's requirements directly and comprehensively.
Task Achievement
Incorporate a wider range of relevant examples and details to strengthen your argument and provide more depth.
Introduction & Conclusion
Efficiently introduced and concluded the essay, clearly stating your main arguments.
Task Response
Effectively identified and elaborated on the advantages of driverless vehicles, demonstrating clear task understanding.
Argument Consistency
Maintained a consistent argument throughout the essay, showing good task achievement.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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