In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
It is predicted that all types of motorized
transport
will be driven without drivers
and solely people inside these vehicles
will be passengers. This
essay will contend that the benefits of this
situation outweigh the drawbacks. It will first demonstrate that driverless
vehicles
are more convenient, and safer than traditional transport
, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, namely chances to become jobless, is not valid.
The primary advantage of driverless
vehicles
is that they are more convenient or user-friendly. That is
to say that driverless
transport
offers convenience by allowing passengers to relax, work, or engage in other activities during their commute. For example
, commuters can use their travel time more productively by checking emails, reading, or even taking a nap, rather than focusing on driving. Moreover
, Driverless
cars can be safer as they have the potential to reduce accidents caused by human error, such
as speeding, distractions, and impaired driving. For instance
, self-driving technology can detect obstacles and apply brakes faster than a human driver, preventing collisions.
Those opposed to this
say that it allows the driver to leave their job as the vehicles
are less likely to need drivers
. However
, people are more concerned about their safety and comfortable journey, because of this
they are more interested in driverless
transport
, and it might be unwise to invest money in drivers
without considering their safety issues and convenience. In many modern cities, people have already started to use driverless
vehicles
to reduce accidents and these types of transportation provide them accessibility.
In conclusion, the benefits of driverless
vehicles
such
as they are safe and convenient, clearly exceed the flawed argument that it will create a jobless environment for drivers
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