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In some countries, people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development?

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It is argued that many adults
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 more than half of a day to deal with works at companies. Certainly, there are a range of reasons and personally, I think it has more detrimental impacts than benefits. There are many factors that directly influence
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spending a lot of
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 standard of
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 world, many
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 have to work a lot to earn a living.
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 standard of living
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hard to achieve their goal. With a load of pressure on their shoulder, they hardly have
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 to take care of themselves.
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 working hard means that workers will have
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 income and may get a promotion, they will have to suffer from disadvantages. If people are working non-stop, they will end up torturing themselves. Staff will not have
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 to take care of their own health and recharge their batteries which is definitely an unhealthy lifestyle.
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, they will not spend their time with their
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 will create distance to family members, friends and other relationships. In conclusion, life pressure and ambition to get a promotion are forcing people to do more and more
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 and it is certainly an adverse development
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevalent
  • economic pressures
  • financial stability
  • competitive job markets
  • corporate cultures
  • stigma
  • demonstrate dedication
  • advent of technology
  • blurred the lines
  • accelerated career progression
  • dedicated employee
  • significant negative implications
  • stress levels
  • mental health
  • physical health
  • social and family time
  • productivity
  • burnout
  • flexible working hours
  • work-life balance
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