Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some individuals opine that there is

necessity

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the necessity

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of adopting

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measures for overcoming unlawful activities,

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,others insist that there is no need to

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further

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.As far as my opinion is concerned, I firmly we have tremendous actions to overcome these offences.In

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I will discuss both and give my opinion in conclusion. Foremost,

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of

first

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view suggests countermeasures should

be implement

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on citizens

for overcoming

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crime

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the crime

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rate.Admittedly,

by

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apply

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taking action

such

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as higher compensation, hefty penalties and

deter

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the consequences of doing illegal acts can

reduces

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reduce

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the

overall

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crime

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rate .

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, one of our

classmate

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robe

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robbed

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our fellow

our

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money so our

principle

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decide

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to

expell

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that student from school

for

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make

a

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example for other students to instil the result of doing

crime

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. On the other point of view,

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of tackling crimes communities should collaborate with authorities.It has been

seemed

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seen that

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the cause behind 90 percent

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crime

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of crime

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is not being able to fulfil the necessities

the

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adults

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and,unpayable

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unpayable

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fee of college for that citizens should help each other.

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,during

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COVID-19

Covid

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it has

assumed

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that

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crime

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the crime

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rate dramatically increased

due to

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unemployment.

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,

by

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apply

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making strict laws and regulations and taking

strengthen

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steps

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for

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to

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following

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is not

solely

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solution ,

in contrast

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, we should

also

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for needy

peoples

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people

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.