You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.
#brochure #tour #mountains #re #part #wouldn #operator #information #dates #prices #concerns #fitness #level
Dear Sir/Madam,
After having seen your advertisement in a brochure on the 28th September about seven days of hiking in the mountains, I would like to take part in
this
trip. However
, I have a few concerns regarding this
which I will expatiate later.
To begin
with, I am interested in this
one-week walking tour in the hills because of my dream of hiking. Secondly
, I want to explore the world as well as
feel the peace of mountains. Lastly
, I would like to stay away from the fast-paced world and this
is the perfect time as I have off from college.
Apart from that, I am looking at your pamphlet but I couldn't find such
as the exact price of the tour, a list of important items, or any medical emergency benefits which help me to get ready in advance. Also
, could you please tell me the proper date for hiking so I can focus on my health as well?
On the other side, I am a little concerned about my health as I feel tired easily because of weakness in my body due to
the death of my loved ones. However
, I already talked to my doctor if I should drop the plan this
time and he said there is nothing to worry about, In fact, it helps to recover fast.
If require any further
information, please feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Gurpinder KaurSubmitted by buttargurpinder73 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite