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In the future nobody will not buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspaper #books
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year’s
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people
 can read
books
 online freely and nobody will not pay money for newspapers and
books
. Some
people
 claim that reading
books
 and
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for
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effect
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affects
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on
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some businesses
are
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 not acceptable,
other
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while other
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 groups believe that online information not only is easy
access
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 but
also
it its
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free. In my opinion, I agree with
this
 idea online
book
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books
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 have
significant
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 advantage
than
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over
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paper
book
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books
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 and
newspaper
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. Some
people
 believe that
majority
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the majority
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 of
people
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people's
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 jobs have
direct
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 relation to
paper
 and
distribution
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the distribution
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 of these products so if we restrict these activities they will be jobless.
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paper
 restriction has
side
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a side
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 influence on some jobs who are provide papers.
On the other hand
, some individuals maintain
this
 idea, most
of
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the
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people
 would like to spend less money and online data is provided on
internet
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the internet
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 or Apps free and they are not
abldge
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able
to pay
cost
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 of
newspaper
 or book. In
term
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 of
paper
on
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apply
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line
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online
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 data has
less
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fewer
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 costs for
costumers
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customers
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. In my opinion, I advocate processing of
technology
 is higher than imagination so
accessibility
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 of data
on
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shortest
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the shortest
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 time is
requirement
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a requirement
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 of
technology
. We have to change plenty of methods that
has
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side
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a side
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 effect on
technology
such
 as
paper
. In conclusion, despite
of
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the fact some
people
 because of joblessness disagree with
on line
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online
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 and
books
 some groups have
agreement
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agreed
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 on online
newspaper
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newspapers
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 and
books
 for free reason. I strongly believe that new
technology
need
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 is
changed
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 older views so online
technology
 is acceptable.
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