The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information about the average monthly
change
in value of commodities consist
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consisting
copper
, nickel and zinc in 2014. Overall
, three commodity categories are experienced downward throughout of
the months.
Looking at details, the Change preposition
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change
in the price
of nickel at began 6% in January and it remained
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at
1% in March. Change preposition
to
Then
, the figure plummeted at
-3% in June. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, this
trend increased gradually at the end
of the year at 1%. Followed by the other type of commodity is copper
. The change
in the value of copper
started at 2% and then
experienced a gradual decrease until June. In addition
, the change
of
Change preposition
in
price
increased to 1% in July and then
levelled off until September. Finally
, the change
in price
of copper
reached out
2% Change preposition
apply
at the end
of the year.
The last
metal category is zinc. The change
in the price
of zinc began at 1% in January. In the next month, it went up to the peak amount at
3% and Change preposition
of
then
dropped gradually until June. In the next five month
, the Fix the agreement mistake
months
change
in the price
this
metal remained stable. After that, the Change preposition
of this
change
in the price
jumped by the end of the period to 2%.Submitted by haloalwan on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, copper, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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