More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problem does it cause and what measures can be taken?

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

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Introduction
Body paragraph 1 – Problems
Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
Conclusion

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One of the first problems of the...
Another problem that needs to be considered...
A possible solution to this problem would be...
One immediate practical solution is to...

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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problem does it cause and what measures can be taken?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe school children should be given multiple vacations while others think they should get one long vacation. Discuss advantages for both and give your opinion.

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Numerous animal species worldwide are currently facing extinction. Some argue that countries and individuals should prioritize protecting these animals, while others believe resources should be focused more on human issues. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.