The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line graph illustrates the number of travellers to three various locations in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the lake had the highest quantity of people before 2002 when the coast replaced it. Moreover
, the coast was the most popular, whereas
the is mountain unpopular.
To begin
with the coast, it accounted for 40 which decreased steadily to 35 in 1992 before showing a significant increase to over 70 in the final years and obtained a majority of visitors throughout the period. In terms of the lake, it
rose marginally from 10 to 40 in 1997, therefore
went up to 75 in 2002 and
fall progressively to 50 in 2007.
With regards to mountains, it obtained 20 in 1987 which rose dramatically to
30 in 1997 before maintaining the same level during the next 5 years. However
, it increased to 35 roughly and was the location where the smallest number of travellers came over the period in question.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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