The given line graph compares the amount of food eaten by Chinese consumers from 1985 to 2010.
The line graph illustrates how many
grams
of food were consumed by Chinese citizens between the years
of 1985 to 2010. Overall
, a huge amount of people have preferred to eat fish rather than meat and salt over the years
.
To begin
, In the given periods, Chinese people were eating three famous foods such
as,
meat,salt and fish.Remove the comma
apply
Firstly
, fish started to consume 600 grams
in 1985. This
range peaked at 700 groms after five years
. suddenly, it declined to 600 grams
and again it achieved its previous target. In addition
, people's consumption level gradually increased to around 800 grams
in 2005, followed by 2010 the count continuously reached higher and higher range consumption at over 900 grams
.
when looking at the remaining foods,
salt contents typically start to decrease from 500 grams
in the beginning. The range slowly fell to 300 grams
in 2000, it dropped to 200 grams
in the end. Meat was the least preferred food by them. It accounted for only 100 grams
and it ended at 200 grams
of consumption over the twenty-five Years
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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