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Many government spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, the topic of government spending is controversial. Some
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 funding should support
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 as it helps them relax, enjoy and be creative,
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 others and I agree that the
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 should be spent on health and
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 in order to improve populations’ lives. On the one hand, some
people
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 believe that it is crucial for
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 to invest their
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 in
art
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 since it makes
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 enjoy, relax and be creative.
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, 50% of visitors
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 the Bangkok
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 Gallery have positive and creative ideas after their visits.
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, 70% of doctors recommend their patients to draw or produce some artwork
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 as drawing or paper machete to reduce their stress alongside exercise.
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,
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 are happier, and their minds are healthier.
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, the more
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 spend their
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 on the topic of
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, the delighter individuals will be.
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, some others and I agree that health and
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 are far more important than
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 and
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 should spend a great deal of
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 on those two because they are basic that individuals should receive in an effective way. If children had better healthcare and
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 systems, they would grow up as professionals and help develop their countries.
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, there is an extremely poor healthcare system in Thailand so children are having problems and suffering from diseases,
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education
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, teachers teach students with dictation and memorisation which is not enough for children's knowledge. To make it better,
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 should restore and distribute more healthcare and
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 for their populations in the future. In conclusion, many
people
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 agree that
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 should spend more on
art
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 though I think that they should invest in health and
education
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 because it will help and improve their countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural legacy
  • nation's history and identity
  • fosters creativity
  • economic benefits
  • tourism
  • art markets
  • quality of life
  • cultural understanding
  • productive population
  • personal and economic growth
  • fundamental for long-term development
  • well-being
  • immediate tangible benefits
  • abstract benefits
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