Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

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Dear John, I'm happy to hear that you have great faith in me and plan to keep your children for the weekend at my residence. I would love to keep them. They are
also
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dear to me.
Besides
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, we haven't met for a long time.
Moreover
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, my old tenants who were living with me,
also
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moved out
last
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month. Now I have a vacant room as well.
This
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week is quite busy for me. I have a work presentation that needs to be done before the 7th of September. After that, I will take some off from work. You can drop them off on the 9th of September, the day after my vacation starts. As you already know I have a busy lifestyle.
Therefore
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, I have a few games and sports materials at my home. I will go shopping and buy some entertainment equipment before they get here.
In addition
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, there is a circus going on in the nearby park which will
last
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till the end of
this
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month. I will book tickets for that too. I'm so excited and I can't wait to see them. Best wishes. Harpreet.
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity.
complete response
Further elaborate on any activities you have planned to provide a more complete picture.
greeting and closing
The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings and sign-offs.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitable, friendly, and welcoming.
logical structure
The logical structure of the letter is well-organized and easy to follow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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