Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

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Dear John, I'm happy to hear that you have great faith in me and plan to keep your children for the weekend at my residence. I would love to keep them. They are

also

dear to me.

Besides

, we haven't met for a long time.

Moreover

, my old tenants who were living with me,

also

moved out

last

month. Now I have a vacant room as well.

This

week is quite busy for me. I have a work presentation that needs to be done before the 7th of September. After that, I will take some off from work. You can drop them off on the 9th of September, the day after my vacation starts. As you already know I have a busy lifestyle.

Therefore

, I have a few games and sports materials at my home. I will go shopping and buy some entertainment equipment before they get here.

In addition

, there is a circus going on in the nearby park which will

last

till the end of

this

month. I will book tickets for that too. I'm so excited and I can't wait to see them. Best wishes. Harpreet.

Submitted by harpreet291kaur on Tue Sep 03 2024

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity.

complete response

Further elaborate on any activities you have planned to provide a more complete picture.

greeting and closing

The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings and sign-offs.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is suitable, friendly, and welcoming.

logical structure

The logical structure of the letter is well-organized and easy to follow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

189 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Supermarkets shoul only sell food produced within their own country. What are your opinions about it.

In some cultures, children are often toldthat they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of given children this message?

Topic 2: Some peole think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. Other people think that government should focus on social services such as health and education programs. Which statement do you agree with? Explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?