There is no need to attend a live performance (a play or concert) because seeing it at home on television is better. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

With the advancement of technology, it is much easier nowadays to watch live shows

While

sitting at

home

.

However

, there are a lot of

people

who believe that listening to a live concert has much more energy than listening at

home

.but, as far as I am concerned, I believe that watching

life

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shows is much better than watching it on a television. To commence with the first notion, as

the

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technology is evolving, it is very convenient for

consumer

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the consumer

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to watch different sports or

concert

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concerts

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on their devices. To elaborate, a person can watch the shows with

thier

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their

family members and friends

while

staying at

home

and does not have difficulty travelling.

Moreover

, there are different platforms on

Internet

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that

provides

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live programs at a very reasonable price so that the consumer can buy their subscription.

For instance

, JioCinema provides different types of free LIVE concert or play on the app.

As a result

,

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humans will prefer to stay at

home

than to attend a live performance. On the paradoxical side, the

people

who do not visit the

stadium

cannot feel the vibe and the environment around the

stadium

. To simplify, there are a lot of

people

who come into the

stadium

to support their favourite singer or

sports persons

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.

Further

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more

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they create

such

a

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environment that it gives goosebumps to both the player and the crowd.

For example

, around one lakh

people

have witnessed India versus Pakistan at Ahmedabad for a cricket

match

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you do the excitement and the madness for cricket.

In addition

to

this

, attending live plays or a match can

you

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create a plethora of

employments

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.

Thus

, there is a different feeling altogether to watch different shows and concerts live.

To conclude

, there are both positive and negative sides to the topic. But in my opinion, I totally disagree with the fact that

people

should watch on television

instead

Citizens can witness the LIVE crowd and the singers/players in the

stadium

because they have a much more positive side than sitting at

home

and watching alone.