Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world's fuel resources. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that prices of
fuels
have greatly increased over the
last
decade or two.Now people are beginning to realize that
further
increases in
fuel
prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of
fuel
and lessen pressure on the world's
fuel
resources.Personally,I tend to think
that is
absolutely
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right statement.
Firstly
,it is perfectly known that
fuels
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are essential part of life,because we use it everywhere daily.No car will
be functioned
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function
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without it.We even have
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to cook by
this
.People who
does
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not live in cities can lose
warm
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without it and lots of other countless functions.What
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mean here is that it is quite profitable for
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
to remove
this
consumption and replace it.One of the main
reason
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behind has been
alredy
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already
mentioned.It is the desire to make less addiction of world's
fuel
resources
,
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because try to imagine what will occur if the
counrty
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country
who needs
fuels
stop to gain it. They will be forced to find
of
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alternative ways to gratify their requirements.A good case in point is current
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European
countries.
As a result
of starting war between Ukraine and Russia,
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the Eroupe
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Eroupe union
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European Union
abandoned
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resourses
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resources
from Russia,
consequently
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the cost of
fuels
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fuel
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were
raisen
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raised
risen
.
On the other hand
,it can
also
be argued that the cause of expanding prices can be related
with
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lack
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of certain products.In
this
case,it is quite obvious why
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goverment
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government
can not decrease the cost. In conclusion,taking everything mentioned into account in.our final analysis we can say that the
further
or current growth of costs
are
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approved by particular reasons and there is nothing we can do about it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • sustainable energy sources
  • renewable energy technologies
  • fossil fuels
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • public transportation
  • carpool
  • alternative energy sources
  • environmental degradation
  • remote work
  • social equity
  • disproportionately affect
  • investment in infrastructure
  • educational campaigns
  • economic hardships
  • air quality
  • climate change
  • dependency on fossil fuels
  • holistic approach
  • mitigate adverse effects
  • funding for research and development
  • behavioral change
  • global efforts
  • energy consumption
  • policy implementation
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