The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given scheme demonstrates the average temperatures during the year in the three cities, namely,
Paris
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Sydney
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Dubai
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Dubai
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Paris
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Sydney
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temperature
was unstable throughout the observed timeline.
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Paris
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Celsius
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Sydney
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Sydney
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, in May these figures equalized and the Linking Words
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Paris
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Sydney
during the same month. By the end of the observed timeline, namely, by December there were similar patterns concerning the temperatures in Use synonyms
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