SOME SAY YOU SHOULD ALWAYS MARR FOR LOVE; OTHERS SAY THAT IN AN UNCERTAIN WORLLD IT IS WISER TO MARRY FOR MONEY. DISCUSS BOTH POINTS OF VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
Nowadays there are two points of view when it comes to
marriage
.Some Use synonyms
people
believe you should always prefer to choose someone that you Use synonyms
love
to marry, Use synonyms
while
others believe we are living in Linking Words
a
uncertain world and we should pick Change the article
an
money
over Use synonyms
love
.In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
essay
both sides will be discussed and an opinion will be provided in conclusion .
On the one hand, there are Add a comma
,essay
people
who always stick with the person that they Use synonyms
love
and do not Use synonyms
care
about their financial income , they believe Use synonyms
marriage
should not Use synonyms
be depending
on each Wrong verb form
depend
others
Change to a genitive case
other's
money
and the decision Use synonyms
on marrying
should Change preposition
to marry
be depending
on how much we Wrong verb form
depend
love
our partners.Use synonyms
For instance
, the popular football player Ronaldo Linking Words
have been
married Wrong verb form
was
with
a woman who Change the preposition
to
is
used to work as a waitress before they got married her income Unnecessary verb
apply
was depending
on how many Wrong verb form
depended
people
she Use synonyms
has
served which Unnecessary verb
apply
means
she was not earning that much and Wrong verb form
meant
this
situation made Linking Words
people
believe Use synonyms
ronaldo
did not Change the capitalization
Ronaldo
care
about Use synonyms
money
and married because he loved her.And a lot of individuals take Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
love
story as their hope and these kind of stories make them believe Use synonyms
love
actually exists.And with the person we Use synonyms
Use synonyms
love
it can lead us to be more happy and feel more safe .
Add a comma
,love
On the other hand
, others believe now with Linking Words
Linking Words
Fix the agreement mistake
these
this
uncertainties Correct determiner usage
these
people
we Use synonyms
love
can change and marriages should Use synonyms
be depending
on financial purposes.To illustrate there is Wrong verb form
depend
a
research done in 2020 by scientists that Correct article usage
apply
been
proved 88% of our population end their marriages Unnecessary verb
apply
due to
financial issues.To illustrate, in most Linking Words
cases
women do not work so that they can take Add a comma
,cases
care
of their houses and do chores Use synonyms
such
as cleaning,cooking or even taking Linking Words
care
of their children which means that they can not commit Use synonyms
on
working in other jobs so that they can gain salary and in most cases especially if the couple have a child just the male parent income is not enough so Change preposition
to
people
believe the choice to make on marrying someone should be depending on Use synonyms
money
.
In conclusion, my opinion on the matter is that nowadays it is hard to find the person we Use synonyms
love
and we should always make a choice Use synonyms
on
considering how much we Change preposition
apply
love
our partner. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
money
is an important factor for Use synonyms
marriage
in order to sustain a Use synonyms
marriage
.Use synonyms
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