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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the future, it will be very important to read a
lot
 of
information
 because they will live in a technological world, where without knowledge you won’t be able to do anything. I believe
,
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 nobody will buy printed newspapers or
books
 because they want online without paying. In
this
 essay, I will explain because I agree with the statements and I will give my points of view.
On the other hand
, I believe that knowledge is important for many reasons and to achieve these levels, we must read a
lot
 of
books
 on politics at history.
For instance
, there are many online magazines, totally free where
people
 spend time reading a huge
information
 and
this
 helps the communities to grow. in my opinion, I agree that the news must be free because all
people
 must know the things to be more responsible and to improve themselves.
Furthermore
, in the future technology will help
people
 and companies make the right decisions because there will be more
information
 online.
For instance
, I disagree with one thing, in ,fact in college, many professors advise a
lot
 of
books
 which cost very high but
according to
me
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this
 is right because to make and discover all the
information
 research takes an enormous time.
However
, in the next year
also
this
information
 will be free.
To sum up
, I think and I hope in the future all will be online because we have
people
 who have incredible knowledge and to do
this
 you have to read a
lot
 of
books
.
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