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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the future, it will be very important to read a
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 because they will live in a technological world, where without knowledge you won’t be able to do anything. I believe
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 nobody will buy printed newspapers or
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 because they want online without paying. In
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, I believe that knowledge is important for many reasons and to achieve these levels, we must read a
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 on politics at history.
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, there are many online magazines, totally free where
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 helps the communities to grow. in my opinion, I agree that the news must be free because all
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 must know the things to be more responsible and to improve themselves.
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, in the future technology will help
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 and companies make the right decisions because there will be more
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, I disagree with one thing, in ,fact in college, many professors advise a
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