The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010

The presented line graph demonstrates the earnings of three various bakeries in one specific place,Calgary for ten

years

starting from 2000. To commence,the first thing that can be observed is Amandine Bakery have remained stable figures for five

years

starting from 2010 and the yearly income that

this

bakery had was below 60000$.After 2005 there is not a considerable change till 2007. After that there

is

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a rise in just a year after that in 2010 the figures

have

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peeked.It can be said that Amandine bakery

have

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remained the same for a long time

However

, in the

last

years

it has

the

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had the

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highest earnings among

other

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the other

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two

bakereries

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bakeries

.Mari bakeshop

have

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started with the highest income, which was 80000$.There

are

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some slight increases

in

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over the

years

.

Neverthless

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Nevertheless

,in 2009 the earnings

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dropped to 40000$ and remained the same till 2010. Bolo Cakery started with the lowest income, which is 20000$.Till 2003 there are not any dramatic differences.Between 2030 and 2006 the incomes have stayed still after 2007 there is a

rose

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and Bolo cakery

have

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outnumbered Mari bakeshop.