The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.
The provided line chart illustrates the variation in the weather temperatures by
Celsius
unit for specific three significant cities Use synonyms
Paris
, Use synonyms
Dubai
, and Use synonyms
Sydney
during year seasons.
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Overall
, It is evident that Linking Words
Dubai
and Use synonyms
Sydney
outline almost the nearest Use synonyms
temperature
in the winter Use synonyms
while
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Paris
constitutes the coldest weather, albeit Use synonyms
Paris
and Use synonyms
Dubai
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similarly
depict upward and downward patterns.
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To begin
with, in the first months, Linking Words
Sydney
contributes the highest degree at approximately 25 Use synonyms
temperature
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Celsius
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then
superseded by Linking Words
Dubai
in March. Use synonyms
Dubai
increased to around 23 Use synonyms
temperature
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Celsius
after being at almost 20 Use synonyms
temperature
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Celsius
. After that, the pattern is reversed, Use synonyms
while
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Dubai
shows a constant upsurge to hit the peak point at just over 35 degrees in August, Use synonyms
Sydney
experienced a dramatic decline even surpassed by Use synonyms
Paris
at 15 Use synonyms
Celsius
, after it was at merely 5 Use synonyms
temperature
to register a consistent growing ,bringing Use synonyms
Sydney
to the lowest level over the summer season and Use synonyms
Paris
shoot higher degree to remain at 20 Use synonyms
celsius
.
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Conversely
, the second half of the year demonstrates a sharp contrast. Linking Words
Dubai
, Use synonyms
Paris
, and Use synonyms
Sydney
again record the constant tendency to return back at the same starting Use synonyms
temperature
degree Use synonyms
at the end
of the year with the turn of the winter season.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words celsius, paris, dubai, sydney, temperature with synonyms.
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