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The table illustrate how much projects are costing in American dollars for West Africa, Central America and South east Asia to sustainable forestry for over the next five years

The table illustrate how much projects are costing in American dollars for West Africa, Central America and South east Asia to sustainable forestry for over the next five years
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The table depicts the information on prices for projects on sustainable forestry for the coming five years from three different countries, namely West Africa, Central
America
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 and Southeast
Asia
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 and the pie chart illustrates the assumed
cost
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 breakdown allocation in the former
year
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 once the plans are made.
Overall
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, In all the years South-east
Asia
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 has the highest expenditure followed by Central
America
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,
while
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 salary is the biggest expense compared to other sections.
Firstly
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, West Africa and Central
America
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 have their highest contribution of 10.5 and 20
million
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 respectively towards their project in the 1st
year
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,
whereas
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 Southeast
Asia
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 has its largest
cost
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 of 50
million
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 dollars for the project in the fourth and fifth
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year
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years
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. West Africa's and Central
America
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's
contribution
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contributions
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 have significantly declined to 3.5
million
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 and 5
million
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correspondingly
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respectively
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, but Central
America
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's
cost
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 hit a plateau of 5
million
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 between the years 3 and 5.
However
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, Southeast
Asia
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 had a slight fall in the second
year
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, but over time it had grown to 50
million
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. For the first
year
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, half of the country's total expenditure is spent on salaries.
Besides
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, set-up costs took 30% of the
cost
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,
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subsequently
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 Other expenses and training had a projected expenditure of 10% each in the first
year
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, asia, cost, year, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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