The table illustrate how much projects are costing in American dollars for West Africa, Central America and South east Asia to sustainable forestry for over the next five years

The table illustrate how much projects are costing in American dollars for West Africa, Central America and South east Asia to sustainable forestry for over the next five years
The table depicts the information on prices for projects on sustainable forestry for the coming five years from three different countries, namely West Africa, Central
America
and Southeast
Asia
and the pie chart illustrates the assumed
cost
breakdown allocation in the former
year
once the plans are made.
Overall
, In all the years South-east
Asia
has the highest expenditure followed by Central
America
,
while
salary is the biggest expense compared to other sections.
Firstly
, West Africa and Central
America
have their highest contribution of 10.5 and 20
million
respectively towards their project in the 1st
year
,
whereas
Southeast
Asia
has its largest
cost
of 50
million
dollars for the project in the fourth and fifth
year
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years
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. West Africa's and Central
America
's
contribution
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contributions
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have significantly declined to 3.5
million
and 5
million
correspondingly
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respectively
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, but Central
America
's
cost
hit a plateau of 5
million
between the years 3 and 5.
However
, Southeast
Asia
had a slight fall in the second
year
, but over time it had grown to 50
million
. For the first
year
, half of the country's total expenditure is spent on salaries.
Besides
, set-up costs took 30% of the
cost
,
subsequently
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Other expenses and training had a projected expenditure of 10% each in the first
year
.
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