The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presented the process of reusing
plastic
bottles.
This
cycle is provided in nine stages which is unique. At the first of the cycle
people throw litter in boxes. Add a comma
,cycle
The next step is
gathering all the litter and carry
to the recycling department where workers divide Wrong verb form
carrying it
them
Correct pronoun usage
it
in
two parts, one part is special for Change the preposition
into
plastic
and on
the other side is Change preposition
apply
different
material.
Over the next step, Add an article
a different
plastic
is pressed into blocks which are imported in another stage . In order to clean plastic
, it is important to wash Correct pronoun usage
it by
by
a liquid cleaner Change preposition
with
such
as water. After washing plastics it put inside a machine which is split into small pieces. After providing small material they are ready to put in the heating oven. Finally
, raw material is available for producers who require these materials. Producers are able to manufacture plenty of products such
as short
or Fix the agreement mistake
shorts
pencil
.Fix the agreement mistake
pencils
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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