Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rates?
Nowadays, lawbreaking activities are increasing in cities mostly,
whereas
villages are mostly crime-free Linking Words
areas
in many nations. Because of the social Use synonyms
as well as
economic differences between communities that can be seen in wealthy towns easily, a need to earn short-cut wealth pushes a person to commit an outlawed act. To minimise Linking Words
this
, the government should implement policies that will remove the barrier between different classes and bring financial stability to society.
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Firstly
, there are multiple opportunities available in urban Linking Words
areas
than in rural Use synonyms
areas
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, a huge number of citizens are migrating to the towns for their well-being. Linking Words
Furthermore
,many people find themselves inferior person than other rich classes, and Linking Words
hence
, they try to acquire money through illegal activities.That's why, the crime rate is often higher in populated Linking Words
areas
than in remote Use synonyms
areas
. The Times article of October 2023, Use synonyms
for instance
, stated that 87% of criminal cases from the Maharastra state belong to Mumbai city only.
In order to solve Linking Words
such
a big issue, the regime should consider bringing a program that minimises the rift between highly imbalanced classes. Linking Words
This
can be accomplished not only by implementing better labour policies but Linking Words
also
by promoting social interaction between every level of the community. Linking Words
As a result
, we may witness a decrease in crime reports Linking Words
as well as
a peaceful country. Linking Words
For example
, the government of Singapore established rules for apartment complexes that there should be families from every community, religion, and financial class on every floor, and we can see that we haven't seen any tense situation in the country for a few decades.
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Finally
, there are multiple reasons behind the rising crime rates around cities, but financial differences play a vital role in Linking Words
this
. Strict laws and policies must be imposed to eliminate these dissimilarities.Linking Words
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