A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Give details of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

Dear Tania, I’m so glad that I
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you. I haven’t seen you for a long
time
so I’m very excited to meet you. I have noticed that you are going to choose the same
course
as I used to study. I’m very happy with
this
choice and I hope I can help you.
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first case, I should mention that
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course
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little harder and requirement to try more than other courses because it concentrates on English so you had better spend more
time
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studying English. As a second point,
this
course
has the best professors and
this
subject could be
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that you can receive more information and
at the end
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you are going to have better prospects.
Also
, I suggest
this
university because it has flexible managers. they would allow students to have more
time
for work and rest.
Moreover
, university classrooms are
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base
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on various timetables and you
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Attend the classes
according to
the desired
time
. If you want your application to study
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this
university to be accepted, you should
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the application
with
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carefully and honestly.
Also
, I recommend you Send your resume
along with
the application to increase your
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. I hope you find it useful! Contact me if you have any questions. Regards, Reza
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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