A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Give details of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear Tania, I’m so glad that I

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you. I haven’t seen you for a long

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so I’m very excited to meet you. I have noticed that you are going to choose the same

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as I used to study. I’m very happy with

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choice and I hope I can help you.

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first case, I should mention that

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course

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little harder and requirement to try more than other courses because it concentrates on English so you had better spend more

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for

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studying English. As a second point,

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course

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has the best professors and

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subject could be

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that you can receive more information and

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course

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you are going to have better prospects.

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, I suggest

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university because it has flexible managers. they would allow students to have more

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for work and rest.

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, university classrooms are

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on various timetables and you

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the desired

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. If you want your application to study

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university to be accepted, you should

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the application

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carefully and honestly.

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, I recommend you Send your resume

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the application to increase your

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. I hope you find it useful! Contact me if you have any questions. Regards, Reza

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

219 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

prospective student
alma mater
curriculum
faculty
state-of-the-art
extramural
scholarly pursuits
cohort
accreditations
holistic development
pedagogy
thesis
dissertation
prerequisites
mentorship
application portal
tuition fees
scholarships
financial aid
internship opportunities
networking events
career services
personal statement
deadline
admissions office
recommendation letters
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