The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.
The three-line charts below depict the value in Australian
dollars
of Australian
trade
with three different nations in 5 years from 2004 to 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that Australia's
trade
with the United States has almost not changed,
while
trade
with China and Japan significantly in 5 years.
To begin
with,
it is clear that
Australia's
trade
with the United States in imports and exports is almost in a constant state.
Furthermore
,
trade
with China substantially changed in both exports and imports, from 18
billion
dollars
and 13
billion
dollars
in 2004 to 30
billion
dollars
and 35
billion
dollars
in 2009.
However
, the most different change was in
trade
with Japan, which fluctuated in exports from 20
billion
dollars
in 2004 to 30
billion
dollars
in 2009. But, imports illustrate totally different statistics with almost no changes over 5 years. Australia was earning Profit from Japan from 2004 and started making money from China after 2008 but always faced a loss of 10
billion
in USA
trade
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • spike
  • decline
  • trend
  • trade deficit
  • trade surplus
  • commodity prices
  • economic policy
  • international relations
  • exports
  • imports
  • year-on-year
  • notable changes
  • trade volume
  • economic factors
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