Many people think that dangerous extreme sports like rock-climbing and sky-diviing should have danned? Do you agree or disagree?
These days, many
people
believe that rock climbing and sky-diving are risky for people
's lives. In today's essay, I'm going to shed light on why it would be dangerous for us.
On the one hand, in developing the world there are becoming more popular extreme sports like rock-climbing and sky-diving people
sometimes have bad results in the end. For instance
, in these big ,programs nobody cannot guarantee us well-provided equipment during movement. ,Also
they try to convince it is safe for people
who want to attempt it. We do not have to believe in the raw materials or put our lives in danger. In addition
, there may be also
another bad consequence like we may face a heart attack during the action, not because it is the first time but because you may have a problem with your heart .
On the other hand
, let me take an example by looking at another negative result. 21st century technology is developing like never so when we perform this
action in social media millions of followers may be interested in it, then
without enough ,experience many people
will put their lives in danger. The consequence may be death. So before doing this
type of activity we should join it alone and do it just ourselves not encourage others.
In conclusion, want it or not many people
have a tendency to do dangerous activities but they should consider what consequences will face . As far as I know lots of performances like this
end with dab results.Submitted by Mr. Big on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite