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Austraylia
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Australian
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in five countries
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in five countries all increased slowly. The
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hit a highest at 2800
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and New Zealand
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similar. From 2004 to 2005 the
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Austraylia
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in New Zealand climbed slightly
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grew slowly
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fluctuated. In 2004 the
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reached 450
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480
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. But between 2005 and 2006 both increased.

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