Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter •Suggest how you could help her in her home •Say why you would like to do this work •Explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mrs Barrett,

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing
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letter in response to your advertisement in Tribune on 29 September 2021 for assistance with household chores next summer of the year 2022. I have one and a half years of experience in housework or house chores. I was working as an assistant for Mrs. Smith in her home. I was responsible for cooking and cleaning the house. I can help you
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on a daily basis with housework for a few hours or any kind of
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. I am very much interested in working as an assistant to gain practical experience in
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-related responsibilities.
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,It is part of my school assignment where I need to
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in my summer holidays to get some
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experience. I will be available to
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from Monday to Saturday from 10 am to 3 pm.
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if any family urgency occurs in my family I will not be able to
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on that day. I Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sarah beth
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • moreover
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