The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
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The table shows
percentage
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the percentage
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of
consumer
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expenditure by three categories of products and services in five countries
It is clear that
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the largest proportion of
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spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco.
On the other hand
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,the leisure category has the lowest percentages in the table Out of the five countries,
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spending on food,drinks and tobacco
are
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noticeably higher in Turkey,and Ireland,at nearly 29%.The proportion of spending
leisure
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on leisure
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and education was
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the highest in Turkey,at 4.35%,
while
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expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy,at 9%,than in any of the other countries It can be seen that
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Sweden
had the lowest percentages of national
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expenditure for foods,drinks and tobacco and for clothing ,
footwear
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and footwear
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,at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively.Spain had
slightly
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figures for these categories,but the lowest figure for leisure and education, at only 1.98%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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