The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives the percentage of
poverty
in rural areas in 1993 and 2002 whereas
the pie chart describes the rural area
share and urban area
share of poverty
in the year
2002.
Overal
, we can understand that East Correct your spelling
Overall
Asia
and Pacific
region has the most Correct article usage
the Pacific
percent
of Replace the word
percentage
poverty
and Latin America and Caribbean
has the least share in both years.
From the bar graph, Correct article usage
the Caribbean
it is clear that
East Asia
and Pacific
region Correct article usage
the Pacific
has
Wrong verb form
had
the a
higher percentage of Choose an article
a
poverty
(90%) in 1993 and 2002, also
that is
the only region that has
no change in both years.Wrong verb form
had
However
, Europe and Central Asia
had low
Correct article usage
a low
poverty
of 50% in 1993, but it increased to 65% by the year
2002. Additionaly
, Latin America and Correct your spelling
Additionally
Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
has
almost 50% of Wrong verb form
had
poverty
in 1993, but by the year
2002
they managed to Add a comma
,2002
decreases
their Change the verb
decrease
poverty
by 40%. From the pie chart, we can conclude that in 2002 rural area
had a Fix the agreement mistake
areas
poverty
ratio of 76% where
urban Correct word choice
whereas
area
only had 24%.
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Moreover
, comparing
to 1993 all the other rural areas(Middle Wrong verb form
compared
east
and Capitalize word
East
Noth
Africa, South Correct your spelling
North
Asia
and Sub-Saharan Africa) managed to decrease their poverty
percentage even by a little bit by the year
2002 .Submitted by arjunakrishnan02 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, area, year, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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