Last semester a classmate let you borrow an important textbook. You realize that you still have the book after your friend has already gone back home overseas. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: • Give an apology • Find out if/when they need the book back • Tell them what you will do to fix the problem Your letter should be between 150-200 words.

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Dear Bob. How're you, my friend? How's the family? We haven't met since we got together

last

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semester. Hope things are OK at your end. I'

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writing to apologize for

unmeant

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an unmeant

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action related to

your

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textbook you lent. The first thing I want to tell you about is that I'

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realy

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really

sorry because after you had left, I found out that I forgot to give you your textbook.

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, I know that

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gadget has a sentimental value as

its

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it's

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your father's gift.

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, I hope to know if you need your

text book

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textbook

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in the

mean time

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, or I can give it back to you next semester when we meet. If you need it urgently, please let me know to take

actions

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as soon as possible.

Finaly

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Finally

, what I can say, except I'

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sorry, is that I will do my best to fix what I've done.

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, I've contacted a cargo company, and I've

know

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all

details

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the details

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about sending the textbook to you. Honestly,

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if I had known that it was going to be so bad, I wouldn't have borrowed it from you. I can't describe how sorry

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I am

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and how guilty I feel. Lots of love, Islam

drislam999Fri Sep 29 2023

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

201 words

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