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Last semester a classmate let you borrow an important textbook. You realize that you still have the book after your friend has already gone back home overseas. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter: • Give an apology • Find out if/when they need the book back • Tell them what you will do to fix the problem Your letter should be between 150-200 words.

Dear Bob. How're you, my friend? How's the family? We haven't met since we got together
last
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 semester. Hope things are OK at your end. I'
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 writing to apologize for
unmeant
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an unmeant
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 action related to
your
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 textbook you lent. The first thing I want to tell you about is that I'
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realy
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really
 sorry because after you had left, I found out that I forgot to give you your textbook.
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, I know that
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 gadget has a sentimental value as
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 your father's gift.
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, I hope to know if you need your
text book
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textbook
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 in the
mean time
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, or I can give it back to you next semester when we meet. If you need it urgently, please let me know to take
actions
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 as soon as possible.
Finaly
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Finally
, what I can say, except I'
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 sorry, is that I will do my best to fix what I've done.
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, I've contacted a cargo company, and I've
know
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got
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 all
details
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the details
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 about sending the textbook to you. Honestly,
I
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if I had known that it was going to be so bad, I wouldn't have borrowed it from you. I can't describe how sorry
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I am
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 and how guilty I feel. Lots of love, Islam

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