The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
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This
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line chart depicts the number of people participating in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region from 1985 to 2005. It is clear from the graph that rugby shows a sharp decline.
According to
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what is shown, basketball and
badminton
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have the same pattern, in 1985, basketball was higher than
badminton
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by around 20, but
badminton
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dipped slightly to under 50 in 1990,
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remained steady with basketball to the end of the period.
While
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tennies started at 150 and continued to fall gradually until about 225 in 2005,
in addition
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, in 1995, the number of people who took part in tennis was 200, the same number as those who participated in rugby. In rugby, though it was the higher fuger among all of these sports, it dropped significantly from approximately 240 to 50
at the end
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of the span, which is the same level as
badminton
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sport.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words badminton with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • participation
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • stability
  • popularity
  • regional interest
  • key trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • local leagues
  • school programs
  • media influence
  • public health initiatives
  • availability of facilities
  • competitive success
  • fluctuations
  • impact
  • major tournaments
  • notable players
  • local clubs
  • coaching programs
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