The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

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line chart depicts the number of people participating in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region from 1985 to 2005. It is clear from the graph that rugby shows a sharp decline.

According to

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what is shown, basketball and

badminton

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have the same pattern, in 1985, basketball was higher than

badminton

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by around 20, but

badminton

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dipped slightly to under 50 in 1990,

then

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remained steady with basketball to the end of the period.

While

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tennies started at 150 and continued to fall gradually until about 225 in 2005,

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, in 1995, the number of people who took part in tennis was 200, the same number as those who participated in rugby. In rugby, though it was the higher fuger among all of these sports, it dropped significantly from approximately 240 to 50

at the end

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of the span, which is the same level as

badminton

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sport.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words badminton with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

participants
participation
trend
significant increase
decrease
stability
popularity
regional interest
key trends
peaks
troughs
local leagues
school programs
media influence
public health initiatives
availability of facilities
competitive success
fluctuations
impact
major tournaments
notable players
local clubs
coaching programs

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The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this?Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?