The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map provides about the information
of
layout in the central Change preposition
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library
in20 years
ago compared with the current conditions. Overall
, there were a lot of changing layouts in the central library
throughout the period.
To begin
, the entrance gate between the reading room
and the enquiry desk in 20 years
ago. Currently, both of Correct article usage
the room
room
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rooms
is
replaced to become computer Wrong verb form
have been
room
and cafe. Then
, It built a door in front of computer
Add an article
the computer
room
. Tables and chairs where is in the middle of the central library
is
removed from the central Change the verb form
are
library
layout. In
20 Change preposition
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years
ago, in the next reading room
, there were adult fiction books. It is relocated to another side of the central library
. This
rack is one room
with the information desk and the self-service machines.
Furthermore
, The CDs, videos, and computer games rooms are replaced with the
children's fiction books with two sofas and Correct article usage
apply
also
there is a storytelling event in the current conditions. Crossing Rephrase
apply
of
Change preposition
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this
room
there was the children's room
in
20 Change preposition
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years
ago. Moreover
, this
room
has already changed to become the
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a
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