The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago

and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the

main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map provides about the information
of
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layout in the central
library
in20
years
ago compared with the current conditions.
Overall
, there were a lot of changing layouts in the central
library
throughout the period.
To begin
, the entrance gate between the reading
room
and the enquiry desk in 20
years
ago. Currently, both of
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room
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replaced to become computer
room
and cafe.
Then
, It built a door in front of
computer
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room
. Tables and chairs where is in the middle of the central
library
is
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removed from the central
library
layout.
In
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20
years
ago, in the next reading
room
, there were adult fiction books. It is relocated to another side of the central
library
.
This
rack is one
room
with the information desk and the self-service machines.
Furthermore
, The CDs, videos, and computer games rooms are replaced with
the
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children's fiction books with two sofas and
also
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there is a storytelling event in the current conditions. Crossing
of
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this
room
there was the children's
room
in
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20
years
ago.
Moreover
,
this
room
has already changed to become
the
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lecture
room
now.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, years, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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