You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to thank you for your outstanding service which creates a memorable honeymoon.
Last
week, my wife and I were accommodated at the ABC Hotel for our honeymoon. I should express my great thanks for your grandeur management and professional staff.
Let me explain in more detail, the floral decoration of the room was an outperform. My wife was totally surprised when she faced the room, especially the garlands on the bed. Linking Words
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, if I say the breakfast buffet was a marvel, I would not exaggerate it.
To appreciate you in the appropriate way, I have written a review with details on the trip.com website, which hopefully will draw great attention to your hotel. I Linking Words
also
rated five stars for the hotel's amenities and location.
Thanks for your help and support and I hope to keep the quality to a high standard.
Yours faithfully
Ali ALinking Words
Submitted by ali on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter has a well-structured flow, starting with an appreciation, detailing your experience, mentioning your action of writing a review, and ending with thanks. To enhance coherence, you could further connect your ideas by using transitional phrases more effectively between your paragraphs.
Task Achievement
You've done an excellent job responding to the task's requirements by thanking the staff, providing specific examples of your pleasant experience, and mentioning the review you've written. To improve, ensure every part of the task has equal development; the section about your review could be expanded with more detail on what aspects you highlighted in your review.