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The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?

#generation #developments
If you asked me "What is the most popular topic in the world? ", I would say it is technology.
People
 are really curious about
how
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what
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next
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the next
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 stage will be in
the
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technological development.
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 they are interested in who will keep improving technology. Some critics say
this
 responsibility belongs to
younger
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the younger
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generation
,
however
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 I don't agree
this
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 idea. When we look at
last
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the latest
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 innovations we will see a lot of
people
 as
founder
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founders
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 who are middle ages.
That is
 why, older
people
 are important
as well as
 the younger
generation
.
Firstly
 we should look at the CEOs of tech companies, they are older but not their ideas. These
people
 always try to find
the
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new ways
for
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 progress. we can give some
example
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such
 as Elon Musk Bill Gates. When Elon Musk was
Cheif
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execuative
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executive
 of
tesla
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 he
is
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 40 years old.
Although
 he was not young he was an ambitious person.
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 he continues helping and investing
startups
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in startups
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. On
other
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the other
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 hand the younger
generation
 has more chances than
previous
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the previous
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 one,
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 they cannot use them
truely
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truly
. At the moment getting something is so easy.
Therefore
 they don't like to think more about innovation when they are trying to reach something.
For
instance
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chatgbt
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chatbot
 the students use it when they write
thesis
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a thesis
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. In
conclusion
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 the responsibility
of
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for
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latest
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the latest
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 tech developments cannot belong to only
younger
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the younger
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generation
.
People
 from all age groups can discover new progressive ways
in
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 technology.
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 older
people
 keep supporting young entrepreneurs.
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