We live in a world of technology these days. The internet brings with it clear advantages and disadvantages. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
In
this
era, the internet is paramount for every category of the population admittedly. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, everything must have both merits and demerits, which, in my perspective, I think that it has pros outweigh the cons.
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Firstly
, since Linking Words
this
planet has the Internet. It became the civilization age that has a number of inherent boons for users at both micro and macro levels. To illustrate Linking Words
further
, in the Linking Words
last
few years, communication infrastructure in various countries has improved from Linking Words
this
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this
reason, everybody has the potential to communicate with either their household or company leading to savings in the cost of living Linking Words
as well as
more comfortable lives, including, improved efficiency in their professional life, Linking Words
moreover
, it is widely spread that education is never before is Linking Words
such
an uncomfortable thing because affluent people have the opportunity to study at top university more than someone who is living in the destitute lives, Linking Words
while
, nowadays the changes were opened globally for individuals who hard work for it.
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However
, despite the advantages above, it has some drawbacks that one doesn’t know. Linking Words
For example
. Some will have disease Linking Words
as well as
ugliest behavior, namely, eye problem which is imperative not only in living but working are inefficiency, Linking Words
besides
, some child are addicted to intense play causing unsatisfactory with their family Linking Words
as well as
grade. In the worst case, these children may not be able to attend top universities causing the unemployment problem that has been a pivotal issue in both emerging and developed countries for so long.
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To conclude
. It possesses positive more than negative aspects depending on users. Because some disadvantages can have been avoided Linking Words
whereas
its benefits are countless for every citizen.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...