Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, so many wild

animals

and birds are on the verge of

extinction

that we must commit significant attention and money to preserve them.

However

, I think we must

also

make more efforts to maintain and increase the number of these

animals

. First of all, one of the primary reasons

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population loss in wild

animals

and birds is habitat damage, because of the rapid development of industry, the

environment

has become excessively contaminated in terms of air, water, and land, which not only impacts human health but

also

has a direct impact on the living

environment

of

animals

.

For example

, high air pollution generated by emissions from factories and vehicles has impaired the capacity of several bird

species

to perceive direction and has affected activity performance.

In addition

, unlawful human hunting of

animals

reduces the number of those creatures dramatically, the goal of those hunters is to exploit the skin, bones or horns of rare

animals

and sell them at high prices for personal gain. Currently, pangolins are the most trafficked animal in the world and are facing a high risk of

extinction

, because many people believe that pangolin meat and scales are expensive ingredients used in traditional medicine, the number of pangolin

species

has decreased significantly and is at an alarming rate

due to

illegal hunting, which is a highly condemnable act. Admittedly, we are paying a lot of attention and resources to

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wild

animals

and birds, but

this

is still insufficient and many

animals

are still at risk of

extinction

because we have not

well regulated

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the conditions that are adverse to their survival. The

environment

is heavily polluted today largely

due to

humans, so the government of each country should be responsible for promoting the implementation of environmental protection projects

such

as safely and effectively classifying and treating all types of waste before releasing them into the

environment

, which will help limit environmental pollution and create a better living

environment

for

animals

.

Furthermore

, in order to maintain ecological balance, governments can cooperate with wildlife protection organizations around the world to create nature reserves with the goal of preserving biodiversity,

while

leaders in each country should

also

be stricter in declaring bans and enforcing penalties for illegal hunting.

For example

, unlawful hunting and dealing of pangolins is currently prohibited in many nations throughout the world by the United Nations Convention on the Trade in Endangered

Species

. In conclusion, the fact that many wild animal and bird

species

are approaching

extinction

is mostly

due to

human

behavior

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, so it is critical that we spend more attention and resources

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protecting them,

this

is

also

a way for us to accept responsibility for the acts we have taken.