the graph below shows radio and television audiences through out the day in 1992. Summarize the finformation by selecting and reporting the main freatures, and make compraions where relevant.

the graph below shows radio and television audiences through out the day in 1992. Summarize the finformation by selecting and reporting the main freatures, and make compraions where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the proportion of UK citizens watching TV or listening to the radio and
also
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data on what time it was in 1992.
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, it is clear to see that the most popular radio and television
hours
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were 8 am and about 8 pm respectively. Looking at the short-dot line, we can see that approximately 20 per
cent
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of people started listening to audio programs mostly from 7 o'clock and the percentage reached a peak of 28 per
cent
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at 8 in the morning.
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, the figure was steadily decreasing during the next 22
hours
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. If we take a look at the long-dot line, it can be noted that the percentage of citizens fluctuated around 5 a.m. during the first 3
hours
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in the morning. During the next 8
hours
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of the
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day the figure grew until it reached a peak of 50 per
cent
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at 8 o'clock.
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, there was a dramatic fall of 45 per
cent
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by the beginning of the next morning.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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